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David | | 01/18/12 11:55 am - Last edited 01/18/12 11:58 am by David | Filter |
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| Hi guys, just wanted some feedback on an incomplete music cover:
Download.
It's called 'She Was Mine' by AJ Rafael and Jesse Barrera, absolutely love the song and artists. Hope you guys can check it out.
Yes the chorus is sped up if you're wondering, I forgot the tempo when playing the piano part and so the vocal part is synced to that.
Oh, and feel free to post any of your own i suppose.
Enjoy :)
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Iasper | |
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| It's pretty good, also, is that you singing?
I hate to say, but the part when you two sing together doesn't really sound that good, you might want to sing alone, or record it when singing alone and record again while singing the other voice and put them together with some kind of program, that'll probably sound better.
Good job :D
Looking forward to another one.
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David | | 01/18/12 12:13 pm - Last edited 01/18/12 12:14 pm by David | Filter - Reply #2 |
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| haha, the whole thing is me singing, there's no "two" of us just yet. well, the original song is meant for two people and i just filled in the harmony .. and i sang alone in each of them and put them together in a program .. lol. thanks for the feedback! |
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KingOfTheKeyboard | |
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| Wow david, didnt know you could sing!
And it sounds great, I would say the same as TwilightDusk about the harmonizing thing, but a great job regardless :)
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happypuppy | |
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| The first part was really good, same idea on the harmony though, you could always ask a friend or classmate to fill in for you. Matching one single voice using a computer program makes it sound kinda unnatural
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David | |
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| oh oops, forgot to mention that i actually do a have a friend that's going to fill in. dw, got that all planned :D
thanks for the feedback, never knew that harmonising with myself sounded so bad lol. |
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GoldenGoshawk | |
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| O.O That's some very good singing!
And I agree on the harmony... lol
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| ...!!!... Wow, liked your style of singing and I did like the song choice!
Like everybody else it did speed up during the harmony part , but I
think it could speed up a little and decrease at the chorus, because
I did think it gave the song a bit of a dance feel to it at that part...
I dunno it didn't seem too weird that it speed up only that it was
abrupt and it didn't have to spped up so fast but....
Great Job I liked it, if you happen to do another song I would mind hearing it! :)
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GoldenGames | |
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| Pretty good singing!
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ICEBURG | |
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| Awesome, and I actually didn't really notice the harmony, glitches for lack of a better word, that everyone seems to say are there, like it speeding up or that it sounded unnatural, it was pretty darn good to me overall
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Hionsu | |
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| Aw, you melted this girl's heart. |
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happypuppy | |
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| did you also play the piano background music? |
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David | | 06/11/12 05:14 am - Last edited 07/10/12 09:41 am by David | Filter - Reply #12 |
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| @happypuppy, yes.
oh wow there's still activity here .. though, i'm sure i can do much better than this now LOL.
anyway, latest cover:
Drunk - Ed Sheeran (Cover) |
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GoldenGoshawk | |
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| That is awesome |
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ICEBURG | |
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| Aw, I can't hear it, ;_; |
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